weird. the tag never alerted me. for future, i would suggest a PM a day or two afterwards if neither of us has responded. but yeah, no alerts.
Sorry about the delay.
No description of his ears. Even if its just normal ears, we'd like it stated.
Hope was not settled until YE 29. Same for the rest of the
Nepleslian Colonial Expanse. Move his place of birth to one of the core worlds like Nepleslia or Rok'Veru.
Description of fighting skills is like one long run-on sentence that doesn't make sense. The others are all a bit bare-bones. Use the
Marine Skills page to improve your 4 military related skills.