Approved Character and ANOTHER new character

[Teddo]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=origin:edwin_shanton

I intend to use him as the designer of my tech submissions, as well as use him in an independent plot run by Kai.

 

[mizunoyoroko]

:!: :!: Disclaimer: I am not a character reviewer and my opinions should thus be interpreted as such. :!: :!:

I LOVE HIS LIKES AND DISLIKES!!!! On that note though, he is 'quite a character' as it were.

:!: :!: Disclaimer: I am not a character reviewer and my opinions should thus be interpreted as such. :!: :!:

edit: I also like how his goals are mutually exclusive. One OR the other.

 

[Nashoba]

As a character reviewer,

I would ask that you consider changing the head cancer to brain cancer. As cancers are referred to by the affected organ, not body part.

I have to say I'm impressed. In all that text in the Dislikes, there was only 2 typos permanant should be permanent

I'm not going to hold this character up for these changes though.

This character is approved for IC usage.

PS: I'm selling off all my stock in Origin Industries. hahahaha

 

[Teddo]

PS: I'm selling off all my stock in Origin Industries. hahahaha

D: All because of innocent little Edwin?

The English language is evil... permanent...

 

[Nashoba]

He scares me... bwaaahah

 

[Teddo]

Kai doesn't want to let him serve on the Raider because he seems too unstable.

:lol:

 

[Revolver]

You don't say. :V