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Approved Character Anne, 21st Fighter Squadron

Stupid Jon is stupid. All right it is there now. -_-
Also Nash wanted to looke at it too Dosh. You might wanna now.
 
No real issues from my perspective, but I'll let Doshii to the official review.
 
1. Measurements: Six feet and only 130 pounds makes her very, very skinny. As in, lacking musculature. For comparison, K (my wife) barely is 120 pounds and only is 5 feet 4 inches tall, and she's slim enough to be called skinny. Giving Anne 20 extra pounds not only will justify the "athletic" side of her, but the fact that she's a D-cup.

130 pounds makes more sense if she's six feet including her eight-inch ears.

2. Where did she learn the Abwehran?

3. Flight surgeon as a class? I'm not familiar with that, and neither is the Star Army, as far as I can tell.

Everything else looks good.

This character is pending.
 
Flight Surgeon is allowed in the 21st. Its a Pilot who is also a Medic. Who is responsible for monitoring the members of the squadron.
 
I talked with Nash about flight surgeon, it was his suggestion I found it interesting. As for weight I added on, I am not familiar with female weights -_-
And about Abwehran. She does not know it very well. Also I did not know you can't learn it? I though Abwehran had contact with other races already?
 
He's not saying you can't, he's just asking where the character learned it is all.
 
PANTHEON of course. "Learn how to speak Abwehran for 19.95! Awesome language program! Downloads directly into your brain!"
 
More likely learned it because her Mistress wanted her to.
 
I think number three is the best answer. Also Anne loves to learn new languages and knack for them. I don't really see the problem but I will edit it in the wiki then.
 
Actually he put it in already
She also knows a little of Abwehran, but she's still learning it from 'learn-by-yourself' textbooks her mistress got her
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