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Not bad for a first try, here are some items that need to be addressed.
What species is he? Nepleslian, Jiyuuian, Geshrin?
What are the names of his Grandparents? What planet did he live on? You say he enjoys playing the harp. Could you put something in his history that explains how he came to play the instrument?
Starting cash is wrong, it should be 2000 HS which is the currency of the UOC.
You also need to work on some of the grammar, (Example)
He heavily believing in group work over individualism.
Suggested changes
He strongly believes in group work over individualism.
Seriously? Thank you so much Nashoba! I believe I fix all the technical aspects so yeah. Sorry about the short harp introduction. I mean honestly there no real motive why he plays it. Just something he pick up and enjoyed.