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Approved Character Applicant for Squad 13

Looks fairly good. I'd suggest going over it once more for editing purposes. There is no Apostrophe in Yamataian.

A question about the Nick- was this inflicted before or after he became a Yamataian? If after, it would heal. Also; why does he choose to have dog-like ears? as for the skin color, no explanation is actually needed, but I wouldn't mind a reason why he has an obviously unnatural skin-tone.
 
Profile revised. Usually i sort details of a character out over a week or so of constant editing. Guess my one session wonder of a character creation wasn't up to scratch.

Hope I got everything this time. :P

Cya in the chat lines
 
It wasn't that bad at all, I just wanted a little bit more than the standard, Heh. You've answered all my questions satisfactorily, and the Character is definitely up to snuff.

Oh, and one more thing, The Fifth uses the Daisy II, so please make that change when you can.

Approved.
 
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