Approved Character [Aquila Flight] Mochizuki Sayoko

[paladinrpg]

Character Page: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:mochizuki_sayoko
Plot GMs: @Gunhand4171 & @Archander

Here is Sayoko's official sheet as I have it. It may need some elaboration on her skillset (as I link to generic lists for SAOY, UOCPF, and the IPG for brevity) but is otherwise complete.

 

[Gunhand4171]

I think this looks good. Though I would add a few other skills. Something to make Sayoko, Sayoko. But otherwise Approved

 

[Aendri]

Yeah, if you're linking to that many skillsets, please break it down a bit more clearly in terms of what, exactly, her skills are. That's a really broad range of skills, especially for someone relatively young, when it comes down to it.

 

[paladinrpg]

I'll be reworking this in the next couple of days to break down all the skill specifics with some flavor text... will post again when done.

 

[paladinrpg]

Okay I think her skills are now looking much better.

 

[Aendri]

Looks good to me at first glance, I suspect you're good to go.