Approved Submission Artificial Body

[Ace]

Submission Type: Product/Service
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:psychopomp:artificial_body

Faction: Psychopomp
FM Approved Yet? I created the company
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: This is my first time making a product by myself

 

[Ametheliana]

I'll take this : )

Where does Psychopomp operate out of? Nepleslia? If so, you should ask @Gunhand4171 for okay on this.

 

[Ametheliana]

You need text underneath More about Artificial Body

Needs to be wikified: Link to things like ST, Gene Manipulation, etc

Rest looks good. Should be fun to RP this and good first submission done all on your lonesome.

If you have anything else to add, by all means go for it. Currently all of the sentences put together would be a dense paragraph but that doesn't do this tech justice. So if you can add to it, please do.

 

[Ace]

Thanks will do

 

[Ace]

I'll handle it when I get home in about an hour.

 

[Ace]

There finished.
If I can think of anything else to add to the description I'll add it, after getting permission.

 

[Gunhand4171]

I will go ahead and give FM approval as they operate out of Nep space

 

[Ace]

Thanks

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved

 

[Ace]

Yay

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved