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Approved Character [Ascension] Arvillers Caster

@Arbitrated - Here's my review of Arvilla Castor.
  • Major Things
    • As she's a Patrician, would you mind changing Arvilla's name into something that ends with -al, -el, -or -ul, please? In my humble opinion, "Arvillael" sounds rather...elegant? >.<
  • Minor Things
    • Would you mind making the dashes in the Physical Description section into proper bullet points, please?
    • Would you mind each bullet point in the Skills Learned section into its own sub-section, please?
 
You smell, Frost.


I don't know why you keep asking for skills to be their own sections, anyways. It's just kinda... Tedious.

*pap*
 
Added a footnote about her name int he physical description section (Since it's basically the first thing to read).
 
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