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Approved Character Asher Orkin Westwood

Although it looks fine, I just have to say, am I the only one who likes seeing some real, evocative descriptions for appearance?

"Red" tells me very little about "Facial Features and Eye Color", you know!
 
Well, for one really, I was hoping to use my Nepleslian when something new came up in Nepleslian Empire section. I'm using his one to actually get a feel for the universe and get used to the style of RP here. I also understand that I have a limit 2 characters, correct(At least as long as the characters are alive.)?

I also improved the Facial Features and Eye Color part, thank you for pointing that error out for me.
 
*nods* Yup, two-character limit, so you're cool. It just sounded like you were going to use only one.
 
I would tone down the power armor skill in favor of having the maintenance skill, or vice versa.
 
Which did you tone down? I was thinking specifically the power armor skill, as it doesn't make sense that he would receive more power armor training than other recruits.
 
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Oh, so thats what you meant. Well, what I meant, is that he was given more that other average basic infantry. Yannow, those who 'don't' use power armors, but I can fix that.
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There we go.
 
*nods* The only reason I was looking at that is because he has a lot of skills already that his history gave him and, for balance purposes, it seemed proper.

Keep in mind that the gangs bit is probably pretty rare on Yamatai ... should probably consider having him live on a more outlying area.

However, looking over it now, it looks good.

Character approved.

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