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Approved Submission [Asteria] Free Companies

CadetNewb

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Submission Type: Organizational
Template Used: N/A
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:asteria:free_company
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=:faction:asteria:free_company

Faction: Asteria
FM Approved Yet: Yes
Faction requires art: No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles: Yes
Contains New art: No
Previously Submitted: No

Notes:

This is an article about the organizations known as 'Free Companies' in Asteria, and includes two sub-articles regarding a pair of specific ones that have shown up in RP already.

EDIT: There's now a House of Peers subarticle that is also not being put up for approval at this time.
 
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  1. Add an overview paragraph after the title
  2. Note: WRAPs are no longer used for WIP tags.
  3. Quote near top needs attribution
  4. Bafuku needs link/explanation
  5. Same for Mikado
  6. Same for all species mentioned, when first mentioned.
  7. Lorath is not the correct term for Lorath.
  8. House of Peers should be linked at first mention.
 
Ok, I fixed what I could, but with Mikado and Bakufu, I've added in some quick notes instead, since Mikado is just an older word for Shogun, and a Bakufu is a Shogun's government. How's it look?
 
Approved. Note: This is for the listed article only, not any linked articles
 
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