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Approved Character Athena Stamoules

OK, I love the concept.

Few things:

In Description: What is a "hungry Yamataian look?"

In History:

1. Is the memento the depression in her nose?

2. The likelyhood of a "rogue" Neko at the time she was getting training is pretty unlikely. If she received it later, say, when the NH-17 was around, it might be more believable, but the timetable here makes it sound like she was getting trained by an NH-7, which are less likely to slip through Yamatai's grasp (especially into Elysia).

Also, why just melee weapons? That wouldn't make sense if the instructor was trying to train them to use the "weapons of their enemies." Kids might not stand a chance against a more powerfully physical opponent in a melee fight, but a kid easily can shoot a target at 200 meters β€” just ask a child soldier in Africa.

If you're looking to justify a melee-oriented character, just say she favored those weapons and sought more teachings on them.

This character is pending.
 
The child soldier was the base of the idea of that orphanage. Figured making things go pew pew was a given, wanted to foucs one aspect she liked herself. But I will add more about it in the skill area or history. Have to figure which works best. I'll change the neko to a Geshin or a Nep merc that is knowledgeable enough to teach others.

Yes the depression is. Got the idea because my girlfriend actually has that. Though depression is the best way to describe it lol. As to the "Hungry Yamatai girl" look, I had read a describtion of Plebs being like malnourished children. Can't say hungry Ethiopian, so Yamataian came to mind as they are natually thin anyways. I'll change that too.
 
You can use "starved orphan." Yamataians have an extremely difficult time getting fat because their body manages their metabolism.
 
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