Approved Character Autodriver Bit 66-2037-8743

[Cory]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... _operation

 

[Aendri]

Before I can really review this, I need to know if you have a specific plot in mind for this character.

 

[Cory]

I was hoping to either join the pheonix crew or the bounty hunter plot scott is making

 

[Scot]

Poke poke, one t. :3

I do plan on a bounty hunter plot, waiting for a response from the Nepleslian crew before I make the wiki.

 

[Cory]

sorry about that scot

 

[raz]

Far less ambitious than most Freespacer characters and that's good. Being that he's pretty much a generic Deoradh rather than the "omg coolext 'Spacer evar!" like most people try, I can't say anything bad about it.

Freespacer FM stamp of approval.

Formal reviewer approval pending.

 

[Kai]

From what i've read, it's a very good character, as Raz said, just an average Deoradh, not uber best one.

Having said that, I do have a question. Is English your second language? there are a number of grammatical errors and incorrect alternate spellings throughout the article. While that does not change the substance of the article itself, it does show that you could use a little help in the English department- Luckily SARP has a lot of people willing to help in that.

Also, Props for starting with origin equipment <3 (I run Origin)

I intend to approve this within three days pending the answer of my question about english.

 

[Cory]

No it is not but i do have trouble with spelling due to a learning disability. I am sorry if this causes problems but i am trying to fix it

 

[Kai]

Allright, I've gotten an answer to my question. I think that for now this is satisfactory, as none of the mistakes were huge.

Approved.