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Approved Submission Azorean Civilian Freighter

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Review in process, a few items to start

First the first sentence should be a general topic and include the year. The current sentence should be reworked to give a bit more detail and include the year.
eg: The Azorean Civilian Freighter is a cheap and easily constructed starship for use by civilians and military alike, it became available in YE 36

Some of the systems are too bare bones. Eg: Sensors, Also under communications this sentence is incomplete "by using the two receivers to pinpoint radio or subspace transmitters, much in the same way that primitive radar."

From the Life Support description the ship has no internal gravity or inertia system.

Also the boost speed should probably be removed. This is a cheap civilian craft, why does it need the ability to fly pretty much faster than most military vessels. .375c is Fast for Very Advanced factions

Strongly recommend since you are submitting multiple ships, that you create subpages for the various subsystems and point to them from the ships so that you are not having to copy and pasta the same information. And having those pages will help with future submissions.
 
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I know that there is no gravity systems, unlike most races, Azoreans feel just at home in zero-gee as in the water, it's all the same in a sense.
 
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