Approved Submission Azorean Heavy Fighter

[Yoshi]

Submission Type: Ship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=azorean:scoliodon&#scoliodon

Faction: Azorean
FM Approved Yet? Yes By Me.
Faction requires art? nope

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? nope
Contains New art?Yes
Previously Submitted? nope

Notes:

 

[Nashoba]

Review in progress

 

[Nashoba]

Appearance needs more details. Needs to say what details you can see, standard colors, weapons etc.

The about section needs more. It doesn't really tell us anything about the fighter, what its role is, anything unique about it etc.

 

[Yoshi]

I will work on this problem, and any more that are seen, tomorrow when my tech writer is off work and I can sit down with them to get this all solved.

Thank You Nashoba for your help on all of this, and your patience!

 

[Nashoba]

No problem its part of being a Tech Reviewer, to point out not just what is wrong, but what should be there and to help.

 

[Wes]

Any updates on this, @Yoshi ? I'm trying to get the NTSE and char approvals forums squared away.

 

[Yoshi]

I believe we have gotten this done a while ago... and I totally forgot to update it here. the appearance is expanded as asked.

here is the NEW url...

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=azoreans:scoliodon

 

[Nashoba]

Approved.