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Baroka (Faction, planet, system)

Moogle

Moogle

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Retired Member
Submission Type: Multiple, One faction, two setting
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=planet:barokaa
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:baroka
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:tiig_riiba

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? n/a
Faction requires art? No, has flag art already

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Only the ones mentioned are unapproved
Contains New art? If you count the flag, yes.
Previously Submitted? No.

Notes:
To save time, I'm submitting their homeworld, the system, and the faction page at the same time. Last time I heard this sort of issue come up (multiple related articles) that was the solution that was taken.
 
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Planet page: No overview paragraph, still has template direction text in the article.

System page: Use headers. Show me where it goes on the map (closer to the existing systems preferred).

Faction page: Approved
 
System page approved.

For the planet, surely you can put some stuff about major cities and places to see (e.g. to roleplay at)?
 
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