Approved Submission [Bladeworks Product] Walter Hyde's Custom Melee Weapon

Link Ke-M2-4 Mindy and Star Army Blue.

This is how to link tier:

I enjoyed the JP to order these for ya, Mochi will be looking to see them in action when you fancy showing them off

Update: Linked the right armor, however Star Army Blue doesn't exist on the wiki. I don't really know if we should go out of our way to give Star Army Blue its own article. XD

I am sorry, I just meant the image. I should have specified, my bad.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/lib/exe/f...army:uniforms:colors:star_army_regal_blue.png

Is this...











Is this a RWBY reference

I’d suggest lowering the tier by 1 so you can spam a few of these and complete the dream.

Another Update: Downsized the tier on the gloves, and I also linked the color.

I now have no further issues with it.

What have you say, as the GM of the Kawaiyatoakeyo, @Ametheliana

This review is for: Walter Hyde's Custom Melee Weapon With URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=items:walter_joseph_hyde:star_servantine

The submitted article is/has…
[✓] A very high level of overall quality
[✓] A general topic sentence under the title header
[] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[✓] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[✓] In the proper format/template
[✓] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[✓] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[✓] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[✓] No red and/or broken links
[✓] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[✓] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[✓] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[✓] Obtusely redundant
[✓] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[✓] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[✓] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[✓] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[✓] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[✓] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[✓] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[✓] Lacking Detail
[✓] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[n/a] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[✓] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[✓] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ @Kai do you have any thoughts on nomenclature being used? ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Pending: nomenclature

Because it's a custom ordered weapon, and not a serially mass-produced item, it doesn't really have or need any naming nomenclature. at least, that's my thoughts on the matter.