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Blinder Strike Bomber

Don't see anything wrong, but will give this a good looking over in the morning before rendering any decision.
 
- Missing overview sentence(s) under the title.
- Missing text for appearance description
- Missing interior description
- Grammar error: "it's" (I fixed this)
 
Boreanium needs to be linked.

There's also at least one instance of it saying 'Striga', In the computers/electronics section. could possibly be more, so you might want to check into that.
 
Hmmmm, well, Wes doesn't seem to any further issues from what I'ev seen.

Approved

One quick thing though, improve the apperence a bit more. You describing what the ship looks like!
 
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