Approved Submission Broadsword revisions

[Alex Hart]

Submission Type: Ship revision
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:uso:broadsword_light_cruiser

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) yes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) no

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) no
Contains New art? (Yes/No) no
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) yes, but this is a revision

Notes: This is a revision to reduce strain on the USO's budget by getting rid of a few origin parts and replacing them with open source freespacer parts.

Tagging @Ametheliana for this one, since she did the approval for the last one.

 

[Ametheliana]

Pinging @Primitive Polygon as Alex is employing Freespacer tech in this design.

 

[Primitive Polygon]

Thanks for the heads up, Ame.

No problems here, since the tech is open to most people anyway.

Since the history section is a little sparse, you could mention some ex-Viridian Array member involvement in the design, but it's no biggy if not.

 

[Alex Hart]

Updated it saying that we got the weapon designs from local freespacers.

 

[Ametheliana]

Well, tiers and amounts of weaponry stayed the same so the DR values haven't shifted. That's what I was most concerned about.

Can you link 188604 when you mention it in history?

That's such a small change that I'll go ahead and approve this right now, with the understanding that you will link the planet.

 

[Zack]

Planet linked in the history section!