C3A Update

[Zack]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... :c3_update

There shouldn't be a problem with approval. No real tech was added just certain entries were expanded. Trying to make the text look good and not 'wall of text' like. The full change log follows.

Changelog:


Fluff Changes:
• Expanded shield entry in systems.
• Added Modular Armor System link in systems > Armor, Exterior
• Added description line at beginning of deck 1 entry
• Expanded Deck 2 entry a little bit.
• Expanded Deck 6 entry
• Expanded Deck 8 entry
• Expanded Deck 9 entry
• Added free state, Nam to designer section
• Slight change to Deck 10 from ‘contains’ to ‘consists of’
• Added text to Maximum Capacity.
• Changed name of Automated Fabrication System to Automated Manufacturing Section.
• Key Features and Mission Specialization re-written (might go back to the old version? Is the list better than the fluff paragraph? Perhaps fold it back into about the ship and bring the list back?) (re-wrote it again, put Key Features as a list again)
• Added another paragraph to the end of history.
• Linked Automated Medical System fluff to DD4-D
• Moved all Armor, something entries to just Armor.
• Moved several entries to ‘mundane systems’ section.
• Moved Radiator entries to coolant systems
• Going to move the sensors listing to a separate entry upon approval no new text will be added.
• Added systems>Life support and moved some system listings to this entry.
• Added fluff summery to Designer Atmosphere entry (In Systems > Life Support > Designer Atmosphere)
• Slight addition to Waste Disposal System now in Systems>Life Support> Designer Atmosphere)
• Put all the STL engine listings together.
• Moved Ram scoop to STL engine listing.


Mundane Changes:

• Added data escape pod entry in systems
• Added artificial gravity entry in systems
• Added junker hive entry in systems
• Added Ram Scoops entry in systems
• Added a fire management entry in systems.
• Added lift and vertical passage entry in Compartment Layouts
• Changed Automated Medical System to that from the DD4-D.
• Slightly expanded power systems entry
• Re-wrote Automated Fabrication (now manufacturing) system.
• Expanded airlock entry with list of where the doors are.
• Added a little bit to the end of the Landing Grapplers entry giving a bit of description on what kind of materials they are rated for.
• Slight change to coolant system.
• MASSIVE update to sensor section.
• Changed deck listing from list to table.
• Added ‘storage’ to deck 10 listing.


Weapon and Shield Changes:
• Added Argus Millitech Type C Electrostatic Shield entry in systems > shield systems
• Added Argus Millitech Type C Distortion Shield entry in systems > shield systems
• Removed glass armor in favor of hydrogenated polyethylene composites In (systems > armor, exterior) and (systems > armor, integrated)
• Added Systems > armor, Structural
• Small change to systems > Drei to include faraday cages and anti-grav generators
• Added a sentence to the end of Vehicle Compliment, the C3 can now use the F2 fighter/torpedo
• Added one paragraph about armor thickness to have more numbers in the submission. It is in systems > Armor, Integrated just after the summery sentence.
• Ditto for Systems > Armor, Exterior



Edit: Removed mention of NDI shield systems and added a new damage control entry (mundane change). Slight change to fire management system too.

More edit: Added an internal lighting entry in mundane systems

 

[Soresu]

I'm unclear as to the NDI's standing in the SARP universe anymore in regards to Technologies, and Influence. -Points to the mentions of Argus.-

Would be nice if someone more informed cleared that up.

 

[Zack]

Removed mention of NDI gear.

Edit: Actually I think removing the NDI gear puts it in the 'no need to be approved update' category of submissions.

 

[OsakanOne]

Then why is it still sat here?

Read the rules on refits and upgrades.

 

[Zack]

Because there are weapon, armor, and shield changes this still needs to be 'approved'

Fluff changes are just fluff, and don't need to be approved.

Mundane changes don't need to be approved either (except maybe sensors because there was a lot of re-writing there but I'm still fairly sure it qualifies as doesn't need approval.).

Weapon and Shield changes are things that need approval. This is why I put this change in the approval section. Soresu already caught one problem with it which was kinda a big one, like 10% or so of the submission.

 

[OsakanOne]

I see.

 

[Zack]

Removed the NDI shields,

Added damage control and internal lighting entries.

Slight change to fire management entry.

 

[Wes]

NAM-C3S-0C Multi-spatial Entropy Monitor

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FTL functionality
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Detects side effects of pan-dimensional power systems (entropy)
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Extremely good vs. aether, hyperspace taps
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356 degree coverage, blind spot directly behind the ship due to its own hyperspace tap.

Range?

 

[Zack]

Ranges added to all sensors.

 

[Wes]

Approved.