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C3E

Zack

Zack

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I'm trying to get a bunch of things I have 'in the pipeline' up on the site in some shape or form before I return to college.

There are a few sub-items up for approval in this, as well as some sub item remakes of subsystems from previous C3s. The goal is to make a template that works better for getting a ship with a lot of new sub items approved that won't require a lot of the copy/paste that google does not like.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=nepleslia:c3e

Edit: Pictures have been color corrected to match the background of the wiki better.

Edit 2: Unapproved Links
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... a-c3-e3200
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... a-c3-i3106
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... a-c3-i3107
 
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This is a warship but you have the crew as

Crew: 0 (up to 42 personnel can be added as needed)
Shouldn't there be a minimum crew this vessel.

Subcomponents The new subcomponents should probably be 320x series since this submission was made in YE32

na-c3-P3103
Capitalize nomenclature
Missing A general topic sentence under the title header
Missing Date of Manufacture
Missing Wiki links

You have these listed as a propulsion system, but it is not identified on the image you supplied, and later you are using them as a Weapon. The page for this needs to be updated to reflect that it is intended to be both a Propulsion System and Weapon system. However nowhere does this submission provide how powerful the engine/laser is.

A photon enging must provide 3 gigawatt of light for each kilogram of mass to be moved.

na-c3-I3106
Capitalize nomenclature
Missing A general topic sentence under the title header
Missing Date of Manufacture
Missing Wiki links

na-c3-I3107
Capitalize nomenclature
Missing A general topic sentence under the title header
Missing Date of Manufacture
Missing Wiki links
 
Crew section has been rewritten. No crew are needed for remote operation of the ship though more can be added as needed to fill whatever objective the ship is being used for.


The P3201 has been renamed the E3200 and its wiki page has been rewritten to emphasis that this is a piece of equipment that is used as a part of other laser devices and not really a laser weapon/engine in itself.

And as far as providing enough power to run a laser engine, you're going to get more bang for your buck with a laser than trying to focus gravity and there are plenty of gravity engines on the site. So long as an aether/hyperspace tap is used power won't really be an issue.


Na-C3-I3106 and Na-C3-I3107 have had their pages rearranged so the topic sentence is at the top and everything is capitalized ect. I'm leaving them as 310X series because I felt like I designed them when I was doing the older C series ships I just had not made them a separate wiki page until now.
 
Okay, I'm fine that.

Only one problem.
Engines, STL: Na-C3-P3102 x18, Na-C3-P3103 Module UNAPPROVED x52

The text I've highlighted is a dead link in the document goes to a page that says Delete this. So obviously you need to point it to the proper page.

Then I will approve it.
 
Good to go then, After all its just another variant of the C3 series with a few new features.

Approved.
 
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