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Approved Character Cain Faulkner

Weasel

Inactive Member
Name: Cain Faulkner

General Information
Species: Yamataian
Gender: Male
Age: 23

Family (or Creators):
Mother Agatha (Alive)
Father Timothy (Dead)
Brother Abel (Unknown)

Employer:
Occupation: Technician
Rank: Santô Hei
Current Assignment:

Physical Characteristics
Height: 5'9" / 175 cm
Weight: 161 lbs / 73 kg
Measurements: N/A
Bra Size: N/A

Build and Skin Color: Fit, not very muscular, somewhat pale flesh-colored skin
Facial Features and Eye Color: Green eyes, thin lips, high eyebrows
Hair color and Style: Black, a few inches long

Distinguishing Features:
Small scar on back of hand from an accident at his father's shipyard.

Psychological Characteristics
Personality:
Cain is somewhat of a lone wolf. His brother Abel was a bit of a problem child, so their parents' attention was nearly always on Abel. Cain enjoys learning new things and inventing ways of doing things in an easier or more efficient way. Although Cain is not very social, he is ok with being around people. Cain has few true friends, but he is very trusting and honest with them.

Likes: Technology, discovering and creating new things
Dislikes: Unnecessary violence
Goals: To be part of an important scientific experiment or an expedition

History
Cain was born in YE 06 and grew up with his parents and his brother in Kyoto, on planet Yamatai. His father was a shipwright, who mainly made cargo ships for transporting various goods around the galaxy. At an unfortunate accident when Cain was 17, his father died working in his shipyard. Cain's mother used to work at WickedArms Industries as an accountant. Cain's brother Abel ran away from home at the age of sixteen to join a pirate crew. His whereabouts are unknown.

When the Yamataians bodies were introduced, Cain was somewhat reluctant to give up his Geshrin body, but the benefits of the switch convinced him and he swapped bodies. Shortly after this, Cain became interested in joining the Star Army to see and experience new things on other star systems and the ships.

Skills:

Communication: Cain is familiar with basic radio operation and procedures and can make transmissions to and receive transmissions from other characters through headsets, starships, power armor, and shuttles in both combat and non-combat conditions. Cain is fluent in English, he can speak and write correctly and efficiently and can write reports, fill forms, issue orders under fire, etc.

Fighting: Cain received hand-to-hand combat training, followed up with a rigorous training program. He is skilled and experienced in combat both in Yamatai-like conditions and in zero-gravity, with and without weapons. Weapons he is trained in include energy pistols, knives, and power armor.

Technology Operation: Cain is capable of operating any computer system that uses the Kessaku OS, found on all Star Army starships. He is proficient in entering and/or searching for information.

Mathematics: Cain received basic mathematics training, to including up to algebra and trigonometry.

Physical: Cain actively participates in some martial arts and exercises regularly to keep in shape.

Vehicles: Cain used to help out his father in the shipyard and learned a lot from him. He knows the basics of fixing and maneuvering different types of vehicles.

Maintenance and Repair: Cain knows how to maintain and repair various machines.

(My first character. Feel free to make suggestions/corrections.)

EDIT1: Ok, history and skills are fixed. I haven't really thought what plotship I should join, I'm thinking about it.
 
Welcome to Star Army! Pleasure to have you joining up to our community here. I'm Doshii, for reference's sake.

1. Very ... Christian names. Not bad, of course, but slightly odd on Yamatai.

2. History ... is flawed. WickedArms Industries folded a while back, so the mother can't still work there. Also, a shipyard blowing up would be a pretty big deal normally, unless it was a small private shipyard, which would be a strange. So probably you should make the history a little more vague.

3. Format those skills! There's still boilerplate text in them.

4. What are your aspirations for this character? Have you considered any plots?
 
Character Approved.

Sorry it took so long - we didn't know you had done any edits. Nex ttime, you may want to bump the topic.

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