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Approved Character Cain Kincaid

I'm not seeing any real problems with this character. Pretty basic, but kinda cool; I'd expect him to try out being an MP or something. The negative feeling about politics is a nice touch.

I'll wait for a Nepleslian GM to examine this too, just in case.
 
Capitalization is needed at a few points, like at Likes and Dislikes.

It would be a improvement to go a little more in detail in the skills, as well as kill the floating ( at Rogue.

Also would be great to get more description in. Not absolutely necessary, but quite useful.
 
This character is approved for IC usage. Please fill out your contact information if you have not already done so and file orders in the faction of your character.

This is KingKoffin214's first character, first plot.

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