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Approved Character Carlos Luera De la Vega

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Inactive Member
Name: Carlos Luera De la Vega

General Information
Species: Nepleslia
Gender: Male
Age: 18

Family/Creators:
Mother: Esmerelda Rodriguez Lopez
Father: Cesar Luera De la Vega
Brother: Enrique Luera De la Vega (DECEASED)

Faction: Star Army
Occupation: Medic
Rank: Nitô Heisho
Current Assignment: Unassigned

Physical Characteristics
Height: 6' 3â€
 
One too many skills, I believe. Sorry. I know figuring out which one to remove is painful.
 
I like the personality, the writing, and hatred for the upper class. The gang history is all right, as long as it doesn't impact your RP too much; obviously it would give the character direction and personality, which is good, but don't make him out to be an incredibly skilled fighter or something. The goals are nice too. Good job.
 
Yangfan said:
One too many skills, I believe. Sorry. I know figuring out which one to remove is painful.
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Oops, sorry! I was wondering if I had too many, it kinda looked that way.

Ack! I just noticed I had 8...I guess I must have miscounted. Sorry!


Thanks! Yeah, he's not some kind of expert fighter at all, its just if you compared him to a middle class person, Carlos knows his way around in a fight a little more.
 
I like the character writeup so much, I'll let the extra skill area slide. ^^
Character approved (unless Yangfan objects).
 
Wes said:
I like the character writeup so much, I'll let the extra skill area slide. ^^
Character approved (unless Yangfan objects).
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Wow, thanks!

I think, if its okay with you, I'll keep him without survival. I miscounted and thought he only had six and I was sort of grasping at straws to hit 7 skills ^^; Now that I think about it, it doesn't really make a whole lot of sense to have survival in an urban area as a skill for him. Is that okay?

I really appreciate it though.
 
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