Approved Character Character: Keisha (For the plot NSS Altomir)

[jakalx]

Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:keisha_mersina
Preferred Plot's GM: Moon Man

 

[Sigma]

Altomir has stopped running for the moment and its GMs are trying to work towards a reboot. However, they (and I) don't have a scheduled date for it so I cannot recommend it as a plot to you. Unless MoonMan jump-starts it tomorrow without warning, you may wish to consider 4th Fleet.

 

[jakalx]

So, go with 4th and she's accepted?

 

[Sigma]

The section about her ears are blank. Just need a short blurb about whether she's got normal human ears, cybernetics, etc. If they're cybernetic or special beyond what normal human ears can do, those capabilities need to be spelt out.

My only other request for expansion would be her psychology section. I'm cool with all of it except that I don't see the "Why it happens" part. If you could explain it in a bit more depth, that'd be great.

Lastly, I think "ultimatum" is the wrong word you're looking for. That means that someone demanded something of her. "Decision" may be more appropriate. Or one of its lesser-used synonyms, if you're feeling dramatic.

Otherwise, a solid profile that's ready to get started.

Sigma

 

[ShotJon]

Hi I am ShotJon an all-round helper on the 4th fleet and Nepleslian GM. Mate you should also make a user page. On top where you see your name in dark red, click it and then click 'create this page' and write whatever you want to tell us about yourself!

 

[jakalx]

Thanks! I made the fixes and modifications and I'm just about to start the user page.

 

[Sigma]

Made a small grammatical edit for you. Green light from me.

 

[Wes]

I noticed this character still hasn't appeared in the RP. What happened?

 

[Sigma]

User hasn't logged in since Aug 2.