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Approved Submission Combat Form Mark IV "Warfighter"

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An article, Combat Form Mark IV "Warfighter", was added or changed on the wiki:
:!: WIP: This article is a work in progress and is not yet approved for usage in the RP. The Combat Form Mark IV, or “Warfigther” is the upgraded state that the Ottyo of The Principality of Prydain transition to when serving in their military, the Royal Defense Initiative.

See the Wiki Article for more information.
 
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Get crackin' then! :P
 
Submission Type: "Militarized Body"
Submission URL: Combat Form Mark IV. A

Faction:
FM Approval: Yes
Faction Art Requirement: No

For Reviewers:
Unapproved Sub-Articles: Yes
New Art: No
Previously Submitted: No

Notes:

I've kept things under wraps for quite a while, but I think it's time that I finally started getting to work - several articles are near complete, and I feel that this is the very first which is really ready to be approved. There's several unapproved sub-articles, but I'll submit them separately to avoid making this one here cumbersome.
 
Could you get the sub-articles approved first, then?
 
So far, the approval of the parts is going smoothly - can I get an appraisal of the article? I'd like to know if it'll make it through assuming all its parts stay as-written.
 
Regarding raw strength and physical speed however, they easily exceed most common power armors, but completely lack protection.
Whose power armors? I don't think this works, because it makes assumptions about the rest of the setting.

Anyone have any objections to this submission?
 
I've went ahead and changed the line to directly compare and contrast it to the Hostile and Mindy series of armors - the biggest thing to note, after the fact that there's no armor, is that they will eventually be given protection and that this will naturally slow them down. However, should players run into these when they're out of their armor, this is what they'll face, and I intended that the scenario go down similar to Aliens stalking Space Marines in general, but vary greatly depending on GM and plot.
 
For some reason or another, my post here vanished. So I'll report it: Currently doing the review and will be done tomorrow - 4/2/2014
 
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