Approved Character Comely Spirit

[CosmicKader]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:comely_spirit#comely_spirit

@Jack Pine

 

[Rascaldees]

I friend approve this. It's not worth much but I'm doing it anyways.

 

[Alex Hart]

I'm not sure what species this is supposed to be. I suggest using a random alien if it's just one off.

 

[SirSkully]

If you do even the tiniest bit of research, you can find the race rather easily: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=species:kohanians

 

[Alex Hart]

I was only seeing Tikbalang, my bad. Having it linked might have helped a bit.

 

[SirSkully]

That's what I looked up to find them, like I said, tiniest bit of research.

 

[raz]

If you do even the tiniest bit of research, you can find the race rather easily: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=species:kohanians

The character needs wiki links to help people wiki dive so they don't have to wonder.

 

[Rascaldees]

I knew what it was because I politely asked the player in question.

 

[Ametheliana]

Is @Jack Pine able to help with wiki-fying this character? I also noticed "Section 9" was mentioned, so maybe running through it for veracity is a good idea on jack's part.

 

[CosmicKader]

Hi there.

Just saw some of the comments. Added a link to the race name for easy reference. My bad.

 

[Ametheliana]

I edited the way it is linked, check that out- when you are linking within this wiki, you only need the last parts of the URL, as you can seen when you go to edit the page.

Because this is for Jack's plot, you will need his approval. Maybe DM him so he knows this is here? I notice the tag to him is an edit. Edited in tags won't alert the player of the tag. :]

 

[Jack Pine]

That's actually the only error I could find out of two reads. Which I just went ahead and fixed.
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