Approved Character Commander Task Force 77

[Yoshi]

Submission Type: NPC
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:npc:eda_fusae

Faction: Star Army of Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? nope
Faction requires art? no

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Just Task Force 77, which is in another thread for submission
Contains New art? nope
Previously Submitted? nope

Notes: not sure if i have to submit a NPC, since I'm the gm controlling them but I wanted to be sure with the Commander of the Task force, ducks in a row and all.

 

[Sigma]

Theres no wiki link, old bean

 

[Yoshi]

FRACK!!!

Quick fix...

 

[Wes]

Eyes and Facial Features: Her almond eyes glowed with a strong green. Her face is framed behind a pair of wired Emrys Uno Sunglasses with clear full circle lenses.

Sunglasses are an inventory item, not a facial feature, lol.

She is professional but always is willing to share a joke or an antidote with a lower rank.

I think you mean anecdote. Although I'm her medical staff appreciates her curing people too.

I made a few spelling corrections myself.

I don't see any issues preventing approval.

 

[Yoshi]

Fixed both of those.

 

[CadetNewb]

@Yoshi - are you still interested in this? I could review this for you if you'd like.

 

[Yoshi]

Yes please, unless I can approve them for my own plot... NPC approval has confused me.

 

[CadetNewb]

Ok, chat on the IRC aside, I'll go say it so it's all on the record; if you're a GM and it's a player's character in your own plot or an NPC, you're good to go if you feel it's up to par. With that, this is APPROVED!