Commissar Farzi
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Nephilim Defense System: not quite the perfect defense, but may buy some time.
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[Componet] Nephilim Defense System
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Nephilim Defense System is ready for resubmission.
Commissar Farzi
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Nephilim Defense System ready for resubmission.
Andrew
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The design is not problematic -
If you need a hand just let me know.
- If you could put this into the component template though, cleaning up the top part of the article, it would make this reviewer really happy. Component Template on Star Army Space Roleplay
If you need a hand just let me know.
- We also need an RP example, maybe do an RP that shows this and the other tech you're introducing?
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Sent you a message on this and the other submissions. Going to get the group to step in and help you out with these articles to get them up to standard. For now, I will just put them on hold.
