Rejected Submission [Consortium] Farms, schools and the Domesticated Fasceted Maesus

[OsakanOne]

Submission Type: Setting fluff
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=sourcian:physiology:domesticated_maesus

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? yes
Faction requires art? no

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? no
Contains New art? no
Previously Submitted? no

Notes:

Lots of players have been asking about this major plotpoint recently.

I thought I'd get it up onto the wiki.

I didn't enjoy writing this one.

 

[Doshii Jun]

The submission itself, I don't have a problem with. I am OK with it.

Basically it's a living brain slaved into computational service, much like AvaNet was when it still was (is?) around.

However, the part about "secret locations" is becoming a repeated problem of yours. I need you to stop it.

Where's it made.

 

[OsakanOne]

Why is this under Rejected or Abandoned Submissions?

 

[Doshii Jun]

Where's the update to this and your other submissions, Leigh? You've got until Saturday next week.

 

[OsakanOne]

It is commonly farmed on Nyli II, deep beneath the structol sea, hundreds of kilometers beneath the surface. During its formation, structol requires an initial 350 gigapascals of pressure in order to fuse its initial components quickly enough – as such, it is usually produced deep beneath the mantle layer of a planet.

 

[Doshii Jun]

What happened to all that stuff made in the nebula?

 

[Doshii Jun]

Or, rather what happened to making stuff in the nebula?

 

[Doshii Jun]

The submitter has three days to address this submission, or it will be rejected for IC usage.

 

[Doshii Jun]

This submission is rejected with prejudice for IC usage per this post.