Approved Character Corpsman Barrett Morrison "Doc"

Quote: Corpsman Up!
Name: David Duron
Age: 16

Timezone: CT USA
User page on StarWiki: Doc.Barrett
How I found StarArmy.com: I was looking for a USArmy logo; lol. But I love anime, mecha, and RP; so this is perfect!
Notes: I am going to join the Navy soon. Umm anyone like Gundam? Oh yeah, I'm writing a book so this wil help me a lot!

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... t_morrison

Ok, added some wiki links at the top.

What color is his skim? Description only says tanned.

I am going to ask a Nepleslian GM to rule on the goatee and hair being out of regulation, as I do not know if they actually have a regulation about those.

Psychological
Barrett has read about more battles in his civilian life than others usually do. This is not a psychological statement, it should be in history. The statement before it says he's eager to get into combat.

No Family or Creators
No History.

Skills need to be edited and personalized. Replace Character and Your character with name or appropriate pronoun. You may also wish to make them a bit more personal, where there certain parts of the training that he enjoyed or was better at, any that he just got by.

Missing Inventory, and starting cash is the wrong currency.

This character is still pending.

For the facial hair and hairstyle: Nepleslian military allows such things, so there's no problem there.

Although the familiarity of having everyone have shaved heads in the military makes sense, we prefer characters to be varied in such areas, as long as its within reason.

Okay, thanks for all of the feedback; however i will not be able to make changes today; I have prior engagements but I will update Barrett's (Bear-ette) profile whenever I have the time (tomorrow) Anyway's Wes, it's my character and what's wrong with his name?

Anything new happening with this character bio?

Yeah I re-updated it and hopefully it's better this time. I just have a question at the bottom of the profiel in the OOC.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... t_morrison

ok, first to your question. You look through what items are available and deduct the cost from your starting cash which I corrected. Common sense should apply as you are a soldier and most of your needs would be provided by the service.

Your service record should be updated to YE 31 which is the current year.

Under Communications and Fighting skills you still have Your Character and The Character, these need to be fixed.

Other than those items character looks good.

ok i fixed it, is my character approved?

Okay, your character is approved and you are ready to take care of the next step.

First using the red link in the character to create your User page. Put what information about yourself you want to share but do not put your email on it.

Then you need to apply for orders use this link: SMoDIN Orders Request

Enjoy.

This character is approved for IC usage.