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Approved Submission [Custom] Clockwork Uppercut

SirSkully

SirSkully

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=items:weapons:clockwork_uppercut
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Basically it's just a really over complicated revolver that spits empty casings out the top, it's something I bothered @Charmaylarg Dufrain about in private messages so it'd be neat if he could quickly poke this but obviously any of you NTSE bois can give this a quick once-over.
 
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Okay there is nothing really 'wrong' with this article, this is just some information I want you to be sure you know. As this gun is it's about 60% longer than even long barrel revolvers(like 8 inch barrels, the gun ending up around 13inches) and about twice the weight. The material it's made of is also ship building material. If you're fine with this than it's okay, just wanted to make sure you knew though before we lock it in.
 
I appreciate the warning but the strangeness of this article is intended, it's a big-ass revolver made by a part-SOL under the guidance of his Kuznyetski grandmother, so the length is to make full use of the rifle-sized rounds it fires and the weight is a result of it being made out of ship building materials.

So I'm fine with this unless you object to any of it?
 
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[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Just did some quick grammar and spelling fixes, but it's good now. You are right it is overly complex for what it is, but that's what makes flavor. APPORVED
 
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