Class: Na-C4-1A “Blackjack”
Type: Assault Cruiser
Designers: NAM, OI
Manufacturers: NAM, OI1)
Production: 300+
Hasn't the Egress been around for a long time? The idea of the civilian ship requirement is that a new civilian design is added every time a military one is added. This does not appear to be a new design nor one made by you, and if it's being used by the military, how is it civilian?
The first sentence is not a complete sentence.
YE 33 should be linked.
Appearance text needs work.
Mission Specialization is not written in complete sentences.
Weapons systems should be on separate pages.
Emergency systems section blank.
Empty sections need removal/filling (if there's no text between a header and an edit button, that's a problem).
Soresu said:-Rubs at the bridge of his nose.-
As for the NAM having sole control over the military.
Class: Na-C4-1A “Blackjack”
Type: Assault Cruiser
Designers: NAM, OI
Manufacturers: NAM, OI1)
Production: 300+
Origin is an outside manufacturer that used to base itself in Yamatai (Or may still... correct me if I'm wrong.). Which means NAM doesn't have sole control on the Nep Military if things are discussed. Heck, even in the past due to a bumble by Uso, NAM developed a tank for Yamatai with cooperation from KFY.
I don't see why this needs to be made by ZA. Why not just have it be NAM?
It [i]is [/i]the government sponsored military-industrial giant. From the NAM wiki, "Since its inception, NAM has become the primary, and in fact only, supplier of warships, Powered Armor, and heavy weaponry for the Star Military of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia."
Since this is a government run organization, it stands to reason that the potential buyer (the Nepleslian state) would not buy this when they want to keep the monopoly to themselves. Even if that means building their own from scratch.
Examples such as the Blackjack and the NAM/KFY tank involved NAM. The Koukens in 4th Fleet were a stopgap measure I sought permission for since, at the time, almost every ship by NAM was not available as they prepared for the release of the newer stuff. I did not design my own at the time since I was too unfamiliar with DOGA and CadetNewb seemed to be working on it. If there had been, or there is, a NAM produced destroyer class escort then I will readily shift every single Kouken into drydock and pick those up.
Nashoba said:Missing nomenclature - either standard or NAM's
What is the ship hull constructed out of? I do not see it annotated, and since that determines the SP of the craft.... it also impacts the maximum STL speed.
This ship is being built by Zen and not using NAM tech, shields should be using Advanced rather than Very Advanced.
Get NAM involved in its creation. As I said to Arieg, every single bit of its internal systems is entirely different from anything Nepleslian sailors would be used to, especially considering that EVERY ship is Nepleslian service makes use of NAM systems.Soresu said:But, I'm willing to try and get things to work. So I want you to tell me what you'd like out of this to make it better for you, and for others to use. And I'll sit down with Arieg personally and we'll hammer it out.
If the tech mods are holding this up simply because I don't like the company's affiliations or the internal systems, then I apologize. I have worked under the assumption that as the newest Nepleslian GM, my opinion matters little in the grand scheme.With the addition of: "Just because it is the Black Syndicate doesn't make it a bad thing." taking things too far OOCly such as personal bias (It being made by a Syndicate affiliate company.) impacting a submission's approval is generally frowned upon in here.
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