Hello! Having looked this over, it's quite good, there was one issue, but it's not your fault, it's our Wiki's, which was lacking some date information. Anisa was not colonized until about YE 23, which would have meant your character was born 9 years previous. This isn't a big issue, as we can simply change it to him having been born on Yamatai, and then having moved to Anisa with his family during the colonization, that way, he's still "from" Anisa.
Aside from that, I'll be editing your inventory to be in line with the Fifth fleet's equipment list (I need to make a code Template for the Fifth to avoid this) but that has no bearing on your approval.
In short- Adjust the history to fix Our mistakes, and then you'll be good to go. However, you are already Approved!