Approved Character Daria Adelle

[Rynol]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... ria_adelle

For Yoroko's planned YSS Genei plot. It's (one of the) pilot(s)! The OMNI-PILOT. And a more... spunky, active character to differentiate my style from the cold Hiroko and the meek Suzune.

 

[mizunoyoroko]

I've looked at the character and it's fine for my plot. Of course, character mods, if you guys have stuff that you see needs worked on it should be taken care of before approval.

 

[Doshii Jun]

The Maintenance & Repair skill is overbroad. Reign it in some, please — she can jury-rig and improvise, but is she really able to fix so much? She sounds more like a basic, if well-grounded, mechanic, not a technical specialist.

 

[Rynol]

Ah. Fair point there. After this post I'll pare it down to... hm.

Piloting control systems and the like. Try to get out the implication that it's more... "Star Trekking" the systems. Using things for unusual purposes to get around mechanical errors or unpreditcable situations.

 

[Doshii Jun]

Character approved.