Fenix Aldaris
Inactive Member
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... :dex_falin
Preferred plot: Bastardpiece Theater
Preferred Plot's GM: CadetNewb
Preferred plot: Bastardpiece Theater
Preferred Plot's GM: CadetNewb
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Approved Character Dex Falin
- Thread starter Fenix Aldaris
- Start date
CadetNewb
Well-Known Member
Glad you got one up so soon, and thanks for the heads up Wes.
Looking at your character, I think everything should be good to go. It's not perfect - bits of grammar here and there, the leadership seems a little strong at first glance, and finances and inventory are empty, but considering what's in store for the plot? We're good. The key points we're trying to make here come across just fine, so no worries.
This character is APPROVED.
For now however, I'll leave this thread up for one, maybe two days at the most before moving it into the Approved area just in case somebody notices something off.
Welcome aboard.
Looking at your character, I think everything should be good to go. It's not perfect - bits of grammar here and there, the leadership seems a little strong at first glance, and finances and inventory are empty, but considering what's in store for the plot? We're good. The key points we're trying to make here come across just fine, so no worries.
This character is APPROVED.
For now however, I'll leave this thread up for one, maybe two days at the most before moving it into the Approved area just in case somebody notices something off.
Welcome aboard.
