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Approved Character [DION] Wulfe Stones

For the review, it would help to know what plots this character is intended for. However, the preferred plots section is missing.
 
For some reason it is not showing on the character page, but whenever I click to edit the page it clearly shows the missing information on the codes.
I don't know what I did wrong there and I have to leave in five minutes, but I will fix it today as soon as I get back home.
 
Ok, here's what I'd suggest based off what I said in IRC:

Link the species, organization, and rank. The same goes for the fleet as well.

Wiki code is as followed:

[[species]]
[[nepleslia:democratic_imperium_of_nepleslia|Nepleslia]]
[[neplesliarivate_3rd_class]]
[[nepleslia:4thaaspfleet|4th Fleet]]
 
The bio looks good to me. Please create a user page for yourself. You may also want to remove the bikini from Wulfe's inventory.

Welcome to SARP!

APPROVED
 
I say keep the bikini. He would look good in it.

Though, I do want to request the user change his avatar. It's really creeping me out.
 
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