Approved Character Do YOU have nightmares?

For @BloodyScarlet to approve.

The name is, literally, a translation of "Nightmare" as the page suggests they should be. It's Czech.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:nocnimura#nocnimura

FM approved for nightmare use - the backstory is this nightmare body, which had not been given its mental data yet, was captured by the YSS Eucharis crew during the attack on the NMX "Nest."

Yay. Thank you, Wes!

Okay, well I would say that there needs to be more information for the appearance as just stating the Standard appearance doesn't give all that information, I know that it is a body that already exists so the best thing is just to go on the Nightmare Type and look at the artwork and writing out an appearance similar to that. As your character may do things with the hair and that so they would look different.

Another thing is the personality, as they were a person before turning to the Nightmare Type body they would have a proper fleshed out personality as they were going to be put in a body instead of created in that body.

Also I think the Rank is a little low as I doubt that the Yamataian army would allow a new recruit the chance to take it, as they could be easily changed to the enemy side while on spy missions. But I may be mistaken but this was one thing I was worried about using this person @Wes what do you say about the rank, does it matter or could a low rank be allowed the body?

But apart from that I said that you can start in the plot so I will say when we sort out this that I will approve the character.

I think the rank is fine.

Oh goodness I'm sorry about the personality. I had more planned but, apparently, I didn't write it out.

Okay. I fixed the appearance and personality. All done.

Okay well all I have to say now is


Approved

YAY! *Dances over to the thread to go post.*