Approved Character Doppelganger (resubmitted)

The Doppelganger

Rewritten with some background information and the four current NPCs given their own pages.


Submission Type: Character/Organization
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:doppelganger

Faction: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=iwl:iwl
FM Approved Yet? Jess gave me the go ahead to make them, and Gallant expressly asked me to make some NPCs.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) Technically yes, it has 4 NPCs linked to it.
Previously Submitted? Yes, I didn't follow advice and the submission was rejected via the fourm rules.
Submission URL: I edited the page so I can't link to the pervious version

Re: Resubmitting for approval

SOMEONE LOOK AT THIS!

Re: Resubmitting for approval

First submit it properly You need to fill this out.

Submission Type:
Submission URL:

Faction: (Nation that the article pertains to)
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Give information on who approved it and when)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No)
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected)

Notes:

Second. from Submission rules
"Do not try to rush the review process. This includes but is not limited to bumping threads and/or harassing the reviewer in chatrooms by spamming the link to your approval thread."

This submission has only been in the queue for two days. Doing stuff like this, can get your submission ignored.

Re: Resubmitting for approval

Just to clarify, but NPC's belong not just to the creator, but also the plot GM.

It has been two weeks since someone looked at this.

I modified the NPC sheets to show that Gallant has control of them, as well as myself, so can I please have a Fourm Mod look at this?

I have no problems with it. Looks good to me.

Please do not use forced line breaks ( \\ ) unless absolutely necessary. Also, all title headers need to be ====== H1 ====== .

I edited one of the bios for you as a courtesy.

Headers resized.