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Approved Character Dorban Bharan

Lanis

Inactive Member
((first character, hope it fits well. Also hoping I didn't made a miss by making a geshrin a kylie power armor pilot))

Name: Dorban Bharan

General Information
Species: Geshrin
Gender: Male
Age: 20

Family/Creators:
Father - Maxx Bharan, Major, Yamatai Star Army
Mother - Liana Bharan, housewife

Faction: Yamatai Star Army
Occupation: Power armor pilot
Rank: Santoh Hei
Current Assignment: Not yet

Physical Characteristics
Height: 1.77 meter (~5"10')
Weight: 81 kg (105 lbs)

Build and Skin Color: Somewhat muscular build, tanned skin
Face and Eye Color: Dark eyes, has a broad chin
Hair color and Style: White straight hair, kept short

Distinguishing Features: Tendency to wear black leather gloves, mostly to hide the scars on his hand from his hours very rigorous training with his hammer

Psychological Characteristics
Personality: Simple, honest, direct and caring when needed, he isn't afraid of talking his mind. Hard-working person, Dorban enjoys the idea of being in the battlefield and fighting stronger enemies, not in a sadistic way, and yet he enjoys the times of peace just as much. When he becomes stressed, his first reaction is starting rigorous physical exercises, practicing his fighting style or making cakes and/or breads, as these promptly relaxed. He takes care of his appearance and wear t-shirts and jeans as a main choice. Also has a tendency of crying out the name of his 'special moves' with burning passion.

Likes: fighting, peace, bakery goods, honor, his hammer, jpop and classical music
Dislikes: dishonest people, green peas, people who don't know when to stop talking or put others down without need, hard rock
Goals: Fulfill his duties, master the Bharan family's martial arts and be able to use those skills to fight strong enemies, thus bringing honor to his family.

History

Born in YE 08, he has been raised by his mother as a normal kid from Yamatai. Being the son of a SA active officer, Dorban hardly saw his father before he has 15 years old. He ended up in lots of brawls during these days, most of those while trying defend his friends from trouble, although he really enjoyed each of these fights in a more innocent way.
When Maxx was transferred to Human Resources and returned to Yamatai, Dorban was really happy, as he looked up to his father. It was during that time, Dorban developed a interest on enlisting the SA, and his father promptly helped him with that, teaching him about their family's martial art style, a mix of kung fu, kempo and a mace-like weapon resembling a weight-throwing hammer, just with a two meters metal cable (and shouting the name of his attacks with all his being). He still have the scars on his hands from handling the hammer at that time.
During these two years, he also received training at baking many types of cakes, breads, pizzas and other things from his father, that considered bakery a complementary skill to his fighting style.
Although not brilliant and having bad grades at school, and failing at first trying to join the SA, Dorban showed incredible perseverance, a strong body and a caring heart, and with those he was able to succeed the second time around. At YE 28, he completed his training and joins the Star Army.

Skills:
Communication: Dorban is familiar with basic radio operation and procedures and can make transmissions to and receive transmissions from other characters through headsets, starships, power armor, and shuttles in both combat and non-combat conditions. He is fluent in English. He can speak and write both correctly and efficiently and can write reports, fill forms, issue orders under fire, etc.
Fighting and Physical: He received hand-to-hand combat training by way of loading all the necessary related knowledge into the soldier's memory, and then following up with a rigorous training program. He is skilled and experienced in combat both in Yamatai-like conditions and in zero-gravity, with and without weapons. Weapons he is trained in include energy pistols, knives, and power armor. Being an enlisted soldier and power armor pilot, he also received training with grenade, energy rifles and specialized at handling the Ke-M3-1b "Kylie". Before his combat training at the Star Army, he had a 2 years basic training at the Bharan family's martial art style with his father.
Information Technology: Dorban is capable of operating any computer system that uses the Kessaku OS, found on all Star Army starships. He is proficient in entering and/or searching for information.
Mathematics: Dorban received basic mathematics training, to including up to algebra and trigonometry.
Leadership: Dorban is able to give good speeches at times and take command when the situation asks for it, but has no formal training in this area.
Culinary: He has been training in the ancient art of bakery by his father, being able to make beautiful and delicious cakes, breads, pizzas, etc, which most likely than not relax and give him a sense of fulfillment. Besides that, he can't cook anything else but instant ramen.
 
Character approved!
 
Nice job! Good you noticed how short he needs to be to fit into a kylie, too! He seems reaaaaaaaaaaal skinny though! Like weasly small. Lucky thing he's not a ground pounder.
 
I haven't been doing bio criticism lately, I know. The last few have been good, and this one. Good history, nice personality and that sort. The weight does seem sort of low, but that's no big deal. Good job.
 
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