I didn't think I was reviewing this. I was just providing concern about the name.
I know you do have one typo: "coverign". I notice that the R1-SPA armor this is supposed to be put on is not linked to yet.
I'm not a checklist-kind of mod. Personally, I don't think it's anything outlandish and can buy that as a type of stealth tech. I'm hard-pressed to find more detail about thermoptic stealth, so, I don't think this article is lacking.
I would be interested in knowing how the tech fares with adverse conditions. Say, when damage is caused: what would a nearby explosion do to the nanomachines around and how would it affect stealth. Is partial stealth possible if you don't have all your projectors active? Then there's weather: how does it deal with rain and snow?
Wes also may have had a point: most camouflage isn't absolute, so, you may want to make clear what this is good against, and what is more likely to see through it.