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Approved Character Eis Feuer

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Name: Eis Feuer


General Information

Species: Nepleslian
Gender: Male
Age: 21

Family / Creators:
Father: James Feuer (56) (Former army srgt. Now retired)
Mother: Anne Feuer (Died in a bank robbery whith loaded weapons (bystander))
brothers: Chris Feuer (26) (In the army)
Jake Feuer (Died of drug over dose at age 17)

Employer: Star Army of Neplesia
Occupation: Marine
Rank: Soldier Third Class
Current Assignment: none


Physical Characteristics

Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 150
Measurements: ...
Bra Size: n/a

Build and Skin Colour: Small but strong, defined muscles. Light tan skin.
Facial Features and Eye Colour: Chizzled face with dark green eyes. Cybernetic right eye.
Hair Colour and Style: Long dark brown hair (9") kept loose. Wears a dark blue bandana (single strip like a head band) to keep hair out of his face. Often has it covering his right eye.

Distinguishing Features: Lost right eye in knife fight and received a large scar. Eye has been replaced by a cybernetic one.


Psychological Characteristics

Personality:
Introverted, apathetic and a misanthrope because of the deaths in his familiy. Has very few close friends and a very strong bond with them. Has numerous "friends" that he keeps in touch with. Often the first to attempt stupid ideas that arise among his friends.

Likes: Theft, knives, fire, his close friends, and fantasy books
Dislikes: extroverts, cops, and lectures
Goals: Further his military career and have a relaxed retirement


History

Eis grew up in a middle-class area of Neplesia. During his high school years he was quite the trouble maker and got in numerous fights. Although he was able to graduate, it was a bare miss. He decided to skip college, and traveled around Neplesia for two years. Then, for lack of better things to do, and some pressure from his veteran father, he enlisted in the Star Army of Neplesia.


Skills

Communication: Eis is familiar with basic radio operation and procedures and can make transmissions to and receive transmissions from other characters through headsets, ships, ground vehicles, power armor, and shuttles in both combat and non-combat conditions. Eis is fluent in English and at an elementary level in german (dad's native tongue). He can speak and write both correctly and efficiently and can write reports, fill forms, issue orders under fire, etc (in english). Eis is skilled in field communications and is proficient in all rudimentary forms of communication (hand signals, flashing lights, etc).

Fighting and Physical : Eis received intensive hand-to-hand combat training (primarily focused on disabling and/or killing opponents) and has followed up that knowledge with a rigorous training program. Weapons he is trained in include pistols of all types, knives, grenades (and other forms of explosive weaponry) and rifles of all kinds. The character can repair weaponry with adequate tools and time. Eis is in excellent physical shape and has considerable endurance. Eis is also able to pilot land-based power armors, but must rely on the suit's A.I. to do anything advanced

Survival: Eis knows how to survive in hostile environments. He can build shelters, hunt and forage for food, build a fire, etc. Eis can camouflage himself and is familiar with guerrilla warfare tactics.

Strategy (Tactics/discipline) : Eis can understand and give out tactical commands and work with his troop to follow those commands efficiently. He knows the importance of teamwork on the battlefield, has been intensively trained in discipline and morale, and is able to recognize the command structure even while under extreme pressure (combat, etc). The character is able to recognize ambush points. He knows basic math in order to calculate distances, etc, and can use a tactical map.

Rogue: During high-school Eis became a minor pickpocket, thus leading to low grades and an adept liar, although never caught he stopped after a close encounter with local police. During his travels he was forced to start again so he could live until he could get back to his home city and lay low with a friend. Able to pocket money and small items useing some sleights and able to remove watches and necklaces in a matter of seconds. Never hurts anyone while stealing because the fine will be higher.

Wood Working: Eis is able to make basic wooden structures (chairs, tables, small buildings, ect...). Also skilled with a knife Eis is able to carve blocks of wood into birds and other various small animals.
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OOC Notes

Ok this is my first charecter and a freind helped me get this far. I dont know what i should have as skill 7 and help would be nice. Eis means ice and Feuer means fire.
 
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One of GMs from the Nepleslian faction should be with you shortly. In the mean time, I suggest Maintenance and Repair on weapons. I know you already get that with Fighting and Physical, but investing another skill slot into taking care of your weapons is always a good idea for a marine. :) Demolitions and Engineering are also fine choices.

For the last skill slot, feel free to do something fun, something that distinguishes him from the other pick-pocketing jar-heads. This is Nepleslia we're talking about here. They get a lot of pick-pocketing jar-heads. :p Maybe he's the only marine around who could paint, or write decent poetry, or play the violin. :D
 
Maybe he's the only marine around who could paint, or write decent poetry, or play the violin.

Mine could play the Violin -_-"

But in any case, Welcome to Nepleslia! I'm Fian, although I'm not a GM of Nepleslia but I do run a fair portion of it. Feel free to contact me via YIM or PM if you have any questions. In the meantime, do as what Yangfan says. As for the bio, considering his family's turbulent history (2 deaths), it would be good to know how he is (or how he isnt) affected by it.
 
Hello
I will add another skill because of the number of pickpocket jar heads, like .... umm wood working.

As for his familys deaths he is introverted and apathetic. I will also add misanthrope because of his moms death. He joined the army to try to focus the hatred into something good.


seamus
 
As this is a writing community, I need you to demonstrate accurate grammar and spelling in order to get this character approved. Also, please make sure you correct any typos in your character and post your contact information in the appropriate thread.
 
Ok, i am sorry for the tyops and bad grammer. I have fixed all the grammer mistakes that I saw. I am willing to fix any other that I did not see.

Off to the other forums that you taold me to go to!


seamus
 


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