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Approved Character Eleanor "El" Krasnova

Well, before I review the character, I'd like an okay from Fian or another Nep GM on this, since the Acadia is mainly a combat plot, without any players on the crew.

edit: Still want a go or not, but I'll review since Kyoki thinks it's okay. Getting changes done via IRC.

Not sure about roller derby, but I won't make you change it unless I know it's not around.

In the last paragraph of history, change due to do.

In general, I love your skills. You changed the boilerplate, but kept the necessary parts and made them yours. Vehicles, however, is the only one I'm not sure on. I'd like some input on whether or not you're referring to space fighters or not, and from GMs on whether vehicles applies to those or if you need starship ops for that.

"as well as keep clear who is in charge of who, even in intense situations" I'd recommend rephrasing the first part of that, just for readability.

Two things in inventory. One is that you cut out the entire Personal Hygiene section, the other is your bass. Just specify whether it's electric or not. I'd also say you can add a bit of your cash back in, since your history justifies having the bass. Not all, but a thousand or so.

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Well, before I review the character, I'd like an okay from Fian or another Nep GM on this, since the Acadia is mainly a combat plot, without any players on the crew.

Its an okay. Kyoki has the necessary seniority to take up this unorthodox position on the Acadia.

Other than spelling and readablity issues, this bio is good to go.
 
I think I've fixed all that's been pointed out. Still need clarification on the vehicle vs starship ops for shuttles and fighters and such things.
 
I took the liberty of adding in anonymous character art for this character.

This submission is well put-together and meet submission standards.

Approved.
 
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