1. How is he 182 Ibs, 5 feet tall and of a thin build? If it's the cybernetics, they must be unusually heavy, which would cause excessive back and spine problems.
2. Cybernetics: Shielded (as in insulated) electronics would probably proof him against common EMP pulses, and the resistance to fire and poison are appropriate because of the cybernetic nature of the limb, though they're redundant to use (you can drop them for the sake of streamlining). What is a bit of a cop-out is damage resistance, as it's too easy to interpret in many ways.
Can it shrug off plasma shots like they were bee stings or resist the raw penetrative power of a sabot round?
3. The personality is really, really short, and doesn't really tell me anything about the character.
4. The family or creators should refer to his immediate family (parents), the corporation that created him (if an android, gynoid or clone), and any surrogate or important extended relatives.
Traditionally, by name.
5. The Capitol City is Funky City, on the planet Nepleslia.
The fact that law enforcement was large useless in a mildly affluent neighborhood makes no sense. Since crime was rampant before the reforms of the new government, they're the only non-corporate areas the police make a real effort to protect.
Why would it be a freak coincidence that the robber was carrying explosives, and why would he be carrying explosives that would be triggered by gunshots? Anything that would explode if shot would not survive the trek to the house to be robbed. Brigands are not always the smartest people, but they're clever, and if it's a repeat offender who hasn't been caught yet, not idiots. The bit about the neighbors house catching fire is strangely explained and unnecessary if it didn't contribute to the character's actual development.
Please expand on the Grandmother. It has potential for a lot of character forming story.
Please remove the skills he has from the history. You can mention what he learned while at a military academy, but tacking on a small bit of what he knows isn't very character building.
6. Please adjust the boilerplate text in "Vehicles" so that it shows which vehicles he's good with in the first place.
I do not recommend approval until these issues have been fixed or justified.