Approved Submission [Ersetu] Empress class 1st rate line of battle ship

[Gunsight1]

The biggest and most powerful warship in the Royal Navy of Ersetu, specs finally complete

Submission Type: Starship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kishargal:ships:warships:empress_class_1st_rate
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kishargal:weapons:64_inch_laser_cannon
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kishargal:weapons:64_inch_laser_shell

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) yes, me, now
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) yes, listed above
Contains New art? (Yes/No) yes
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No

Notes: *pokes @CadetNewb *

 

[CadetNewb]

*rolls up his sleeves*

 

[CadetNewb]

Alright, the only problem I see here so far is that the cartridges use a wrap - I suggest using the chart conventionally, since those of us on lower-end mobile phones can't read the article with it.

 

[Gunsight1]

I have no idea what that is, or what to do with it?

 

[CadetNewb]

I meant the formatting around the chart, that's all. XD

 

[Gunsight1]

This template is the identical one from all my previously approved ammunition. Only the information entered into the table and text was changed to reflect the different weapon.

 

[CadetNewb]

Recent commenters have been particularly vehement, however, I agree with you.

APPROVED

 

[Gunsight1]

Woohoo!