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Approved Submission [ERSETU] Revenge class 2nd Rate Ship of the Line

Gunsight1

Potato Salad
Inactive Member
The Revenge class ship of the line! :D

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Submission Type: Starship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:kishargal:ships:warships:revenge_class_3rd_rate

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) Yes, me, now
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) No
Contains New art? (Yes/No) Yes
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No

Notes: ping @CadetNewb
 
This suggestion has been implemented. Votes are no longer accepted.
Under the 'Stats and Performance', you'll want to list the Damage Capacity as "Tier: 14 (Medium Capitol Ship). Other than that, it should be good to go.

The submitted article is/has…
[O] A very high level of overall quality
[O] A general topic sentence under the title header
[O] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[O] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[O] In the proper format/template
[O] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[O] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[O] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[O] No red and/or broken links
[O] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[O] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[X] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[X] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[X] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[X] Lacking Detail
[X] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[O] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[O] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ - ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ - ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
 
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