Approved Submission [ERSETU] Revenge class 2nd Rate Ship of the Line

The submitted article is/has…
[O] A very high level of overall quality
[O] A general topic sentence under the title header
[O] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[O] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[O] In the proper format/template
[O] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[O] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[O] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[O] No red and/or broken links
[O] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[O] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[X] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[X] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[X] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[X] Lacking Detail
[X] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[O] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[O] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ - ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ - ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.