Link Thorn.
"surviveability" (spelling)
Link Freespacer Junkers.
Kikyou Sector (spelling and link the Kikyล Sector)
"Theoretically, the jump capability is potent enough to ignore gravitational field effects of nearby stars."
(Can't ignore gravity wells, take this out)
Speeds are not in standard format.
FTL boosters were banned as of Jan 1, 2011.
nonexistant (spelling)
mark problems, such as places where you need text before bullet lists or other headers or where I found problems with DR values.
Do not use forced line breaks (\\)
Link Minkan and Nepleslian
"Turbo Aether Plasma Drives are banned from the civilian market because it is also considered an aether weapon."
Tokomac-explain in the article
Costs 5,000 extra (5,000 what?)
"Subspace Antenna array A heavy duty antenna operating in subspace to determine various quantum events and detect FTL communications and passing FTL vessels." (Explain how this isn't overpowered in the thread)
Laser rangefinder should only be capable of 1 AU as it uses the thermal imagers which only have a 1 AU range.
This needs FM approval, but I will tag Wes once changes are made.
There are other things, but I want to see what it looks like with these fixes before I go on.