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Star ArmyⓇ is a landmark of forum roleplaying. Opened in 2002, Star Army is like an internet clubhouse for people who love roleplaying, art, and worldbuilding. Anyone 18 or older may join for free. New members are welcome! Use the "Register" button below.

Note: This is a play-by-post RPG site. If you're looking for the tabletop miniatures wargame "5150: Star Army" instead, see Two Hour Wargames.

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Approved Character Ezra Brand

I went through, and fixed formatting and spelling for you, so there's that done.

In the skin, specify the skin color, please. A fleshy color could mean different things depending on race, and Caucasian is not the only race in the setting.

Though I'm not sure how well that gang idea would work, I won't say no flat out to it. I'll let Doshii or Nash have final say there.

Otherwise, it looks like a decent first character. Good job.

Pending the changes and final say from a mod, I recommend this character for approval.
 
I changed the skin color to reflect a Caucasian color.

Really, I wasn't too sure about the gang background myself. I couldn't find anything on criminals being specifically barred serving in the military, though. I do have another background of carrying on a military tradition in the family in mind if the gang one won't fit in.

Thank you for the help.
 
Added some Wiki links at the top.

Overall your typical fine Nepleslian Fighting Man. Good Job, and Welcome to SARP.

Approved.

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