Approved Character Ezra Brand

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Finally got my first character done! If anything needs to be changed or revised, please let me know and I'll do my best to take care of it.

Thank you!

I went through, and fixed formatting and spelling for you, so there's that done.

In the skin, specify the skin color, please. A fleshy color could mean different things depending on race, and Caucasian is not the only race in the setting.

Though I'm not sure how well that gang idea would work, I won't say no flat out to it. I'll let Doshii or Nash have final say there.

Otherwise, it looks like a decent first character. Good job.

Pending the changes and final say from a mod, I recommend this character for approval.

I changed the skin color to reflect a Caucasian color.

Really, I wasn't too sure about the gang background myself. I couldn't find anything on criminals being specifically barred serving in the military, though. I do have another background of carrying on a military tradition in the family in mind if the gang one won't fit in.

Thank you for the help.

Added some Wiki links at the top.

Overall your typical fine Nepleslian Fighting Man. Good Job, and Welcome to SARP.

Approved.

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