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Approved Character Fay Saelus

Fay

Well-Known Member
Name: Fay Saelus


General Information

Species: Geshrin/Nepleslian Hybrid
Gender: Male
Age: 19

Family / Creators: Father: James Saelus (deceased), Mother: Fiona Saelus (alive), Siblings: None

Employer: Empire of Nepleslia
Occupation: Marine Medic
Rank: Soldier 3rd Class
Current Assignment: NSS Alliance


Physical Characteristics

Height: 6'0"
Weight: 157 lbs
Measurements: ???
Bra Size: N/A

Build and Skin Colour: Slightly muscular with lightly tanned skin.
Facial Features and Eye Colour: Cleanly shaven, thin face with emerald green eyes.
Hair Colour and Style: Platinum blonde (looks like grey) hair long enough for him to put up in a ponytail, but stops short around his shoulderblades.

Distinguishing Features: Cybernetic eyes and a mechanical right kneecap.


Psychological Characteristics

Personality:
Having lived with his mother for the last six years of his life, Fay has gained kindness, humility, and respect for women. He is also quite helpful and needs to be useful in some way. Although he despises the crime syndicates of Nepleslia, Fay does not let his hate control his actions.

Likes: Research, study, and uneventful times
Dislikes: All forms of organized crime, violence, and death.
Goals: To gain the power necessary to put an end to the crimelord supremacy on Nepleslia for good.


History

Fay's father was a Nepleslian hitman for a local crimelord on Nepleslia. After meeting Fay's Geshrin mother, who was a medical assistant at that time, they fell in love. Fay was born in YE 10, about 3 years after his parents were married. Around YE 20, Fay's father resigned from the 'business'; however, this did not sit well with his old boss one bit. To keep a constant paycheck to feed the family and pay bills, his father became a bouncer at a local pub.

Life was good... until Fay's 13th birthday. While on his way home from his new career, Fay's father was gunned down by his own ex-colleagues, the hitmen of his old boss. Thus, Fay despises most, if not all, criminal organizations. A year after his father's death, his mother was accepted as a medical professor of cybernetics installation at a small respectible university within a stable, non-violent zone of Nepleslia.

His mother now had a high enough position and plenty of money to get him a scholarship into a medical military academy. Unfortunately, a freak shuttle accident in YE 27 caused him to go blind and lose his right kneecap entirely. With his mother's knowledge, funds, and position, Fay was able to get cybernetic eyes and a mechanical kneecap. After recovering, Fay attended the academy and has just recently graduated.


Skills

Medical: Fay's mother taught him a lot about first aid and the basics of several ailments and their cures. He also has recently graduated from a medical academy at 13th in his class.

Fighting and Physical: Before his death, Sergeant Saelus taught Fay a how to defend himself both inside and out of the Nepleslian society. Fay learned the basics of hand-to-hand combat and sidearm usage. Military training also taught him to use rifles and grenades. Fay has always enjoyed running, but never really liked any form of sports.

Survival: From his training, Fay can salvage for food in most environments. He is also capable of building a basic form of shelter and lighting a small fire with the right tools.

Communications: The training Fay received at the academy taught him to understand radio lingo, which is necessary in any combat situation. He also will keep full medical records of all marines and other personnel under his care.

Strategy: Fay is fairly disciplined. He feels that loyalty is important in order to rid the galaxy of anarchy and corruption. Fay will obey any order he is given, but he hopes that he will never receive a command to commit an atrocity of any kind.

Cullinary: Because his mother worked so much, Fay had to do most of the cooking. He knows how to cook quite a few delectable dishes. Fay doesn't like to openly share this ability, however.

Domestic: Fay also had to do much of the cleaning around the house. Thus, he is neat and tidy. Cleaning something, whether it's a flesh wound or a dirty floor, seems to be calming to Fay.


OOC Notes

This is my first time in creating a character, so please be kind! I would love to hear any suggestions to make this bio perfect. ^^ I hope to eventually earn your respect and have the honor of RPing with you all! ^_^ I haven't figured out which plotship to request to join yet. That's why I put "Currently Unassigned". I also didn't quite understand about the Measurements... >.>;; Is that only for females (like bra sizes), or something else?
 
A. Pimpin' Bio.
B. Since you're Nepleslian and gave your guy a SAoN rank, he's headin' to the NSS Alliance.
C. Measurements aren't all that important really. Height and weight cuts it for guys.
D. Man, the fact you joined up and conquered the daunting task of making and submitting a bio is enough to earn our respect.
 
I'd like to throw my bit in, if you think SUBLIMEinal is too much of a task to write, just call him Adrian. Now, the Bio you've put up is simple(as in, not complex), I like the effort put into describing how he attained his skills.

These 'Gentleman-like' qualities arn't often found in a Nepleslian, this is no problem of course, these will probably make you a more responsible Medic(*coughadriancoughcoughcough*.) Just for fun, certain personality quirks of your everday Nepleslian include but are not limited too:
Dirty Joke Time
Beer Drinking Time
Guns Making Boom Noises Time
Boom Things Making Boom Noises Time
Promotions Due to Swift Kicks to the Groin Time(Inside joke, don't take it seriously.)

Moving along, I don't really see anything wrong with your profile, could use a little detailing here and there for a more lively looking bio. It's a bit a better than mine was when I made one, so your's to be approved soon enough.

One last note, you might find this character sitting around for awhile since the NSS Alliance has already departed for the mission to Elysia.
 
Alright, thanks, Kokuten. ^_^ I'll take that in mind, however, I would like a few more opinions before I change anything... er... drastic, lol. I would also like to thank Fian for his support as well. B)
 
:D Thanks! o.o Why are there two??? :? Does that mean something? :?: Or is it just an accidental double post? :!:
 
Its because your special :)
 
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